..and then there is the "but"... it seems most things have a "but".
Have you ever had a mood where you can find the tarnish on the silver lining? That would be me, right now. I find the mesh between the velveteen blouse and the shorts (jean skirt?) to be a somewhat distracting element. The colorful shorts also are a distraction to my eye. The focus seems to be on her face, as her hair frames it so nicely and draws attention to it, but then my eye is drawn downward to the mesh and shorts.
I used another window to "crop" her at the mesh of the blouse and it seemed to help me.
There is my unsolicited critique and advice from "Joe Bob the utter novice". Take it as you will. I am going crawl back to the peanut gallery, now.